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MyNameIsDannyFcckinFattom
Thursday 26 June 2014 - 23:52:52

Skip to 1:38 give me a response on what you think
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fpNvW6q-0BA



InfinityZero
Friday 27 June 2014 - 03:53:20

I could barely hear anything other than your Voice, so I'd recommend learning how to mix, for starters. Vocals aren't bad though.

Didn't know what was happening with the Random cuts to silence/weird sounds. I wasn't sure if that was meant to be a transition to a new song or just part of one track. Anyway, the stuff after that sounds sort of like noise music (stuff like Propergol), though I'm not sure if that was intentional.


MyNameIsDannyFcckinFattom
Friday 27 June 2014 - 08:39:36

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I ran through the whole thing for the least 6 mins no writing Down on paper I didn't do screams but instead growls because is very tiring and I dont have a computer to pause and edit for mixing if I did it would sound alot better on a interface microphone with better quality and better timing but do you mean mixing with lyrics or mixing with another Voice on top I'll let this be known is only a demo track until I'm able to afford a computer and buy off an usb interface with a microphone



InfinityZero
Friday 27 June 2014 - 16:37:24

I meant mixing as in how loud the instruments/vocals are in relationship to each other.


MyNameIsDannyFcckinFattom
Friday 27 June 2014 - 23:59:34


Alright that's something I actually notice since my first track recorded through a Sony MIC recorder I'll try to have a decent Voice pitch next time so do you do band's?



InfinityZero
Saturday 28 June 2014 - 00:28:48

It isn't about your Voice pitch, it's about volume. Record the tracks for each part separately and then mix them in audio software.

What do you mean by "do band's"?


MyNameIsDannyFcckinFattom
Saturday 28 June 2014 - 02:57:00



Like play in a band, and I dont even have a PC that stuff always been on my mind of doing I'm thinking of making a mix tape album with cover album of a lonely story of a broken Angel by the next month when I'm able to afford a PC and a microphone im just gonna pick up some matching instruments tracks I dont care who's by who I have to find a way to get promoted this way, you wouldn't mind sticking around and helping me out on this like letting me know when I get started recording the first track if music HAS any Taste or what I should work on with the track to make it better I really have no friends or No One to support me on this but it seems like you are already

InfinityZero
Saturday 28 June 2014 - 05:17:21

Man, you need to punctuate your sentences. It takes me a while to figure out what you're saying.

Nope, I'm not in a band, though I do play a little guitar. Not much of a musician but I know what I like and don't like. And no, I wouldn't mind giving you feedback when you post stuff--just keep it on this same thread instead of making more every time you post. It keeps things more organized.

Also, if you Ever need it, I am an album artist and can create album artwork for you or your band.

So, you're planning on making a demo? In one month? Good luck I guess, but I think you should have some solid Ideas for songs and a bunch of written material before doing that, and at this point it seems like you don't even have the instruments. Still, good to know that you're determined. I can give you feedback, of course. Just keep in mind that I'm not a fan of Deathcore or metalcore.


MyNameIsDannyFcckinFattom
Saturday 28 June 2014 - 22:12:41



Just give me some better lyrics you fuck ,lolz alright I'll be back next weekend, Cya
  



InfinityZero
Sunday 29 June 2014 - 02:24:57

Um... okay?

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